Our final script, ready to film for tomorrow after school:
FADE IN :
INT: HOUSEPARTY - NIGHT
LONG TAKE
There is loud music, drinking, and people causing commotion. TOMAS is in the kitchen chugging a drink with crowd cheering him on, he finishes his drink and applause continues. He puts his arm around NEIL
TOMAS: You’re my best friend, bro. I love you so much dude! (slurring his words)
NEIL smiles in an almost crying manner and embraces TOMAS.
Camera moves over to the next room, Nick is sitting on the couch talking to a girl. His ex (BELLE) is seen in the background staring, JULIAN is sitting on the other side of the couch on his phone he looks up and scoffs.
NICK: So um.... How are you liking the party? (talks nervously)
SOL: Yeaahhhhh its great, thanks for inviting my friends and I (slurring her words)
SOL spills water onto NICKS pants
SOL: Oh my gahh im soooo sorry
NICK: Ohhh hahaha yeah dont worry about it, I have at least a thousand khakis
SOL: Come on lets go clean you up
SOL and NICK get up from the couch as NICK gets up from the couch he looks back at his ex BELLE as the camera catches NICKS facial expression it cuts to the new seen
HARD CUT:
INT: GAS STATION - NIGHT
Close up of NICKS face is seen (graphic match) he is staring at a bottle of liquor in the back refrigerators, and approaches the bottle. He opens the fridge and grabs the bottle, the scene cuts to the 3 friends in the car (NEIL, TOMAS, and JULIAN)
JULIAN: Look NEIL, just face the facts and admit that the new trilogy sucks
NEIL: EAT A DUCK. The new trilogy is our generations new craze
TOMAS: Would you guys shut up about Star Wars already, all the movies suck
JULIAN: Oh god dont get me started i'm not even going to try and debate with a Star Trek fan..
Cuts back into the gas station Nick is approaching the cashier with the bottle of liquor in his hands. Cuts back to car.
NEIL: SHHHHHHH NICK is at the counter!
JULIAN: Oh god I told you guys this wasn’t a good idea..
Cuts back to gas station, cashier puts the bottle in a brown bag and asks NICK for his ID
Cashier: ID please..
Nick: No problem sir
Close up of NICKS face flashes to memories with ex girlfriend
Memories end and its a close up of the bottle, medium shot shows Nick grab the bottle and runs out the door
Cuts to black, punk rock music starts in the background (title screen)
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